The attemp to start over!! Storyboard, rough version

After getting the feedback from others, and seeing Anezka's class presented on Tuesday, I feel I need to work on extending my storyboard more. Considering the previous story didn't cover the mania part of bipolar disorder, I think it is crucial to include that in my new story. Also the feedback shows that I need to find a way to make the metaphor explicit to my audience or they would otherwise misunderstand the message or even not getting it at all.

So I came up with this new storyline. Playing with the metaphor of wave to imply the strength of mood-swings of bipolar syndromes. Also I want the voice of this PSA being more informative and direct in order to give my audience a clear sense what the film is about. Right now the voice is the copy I wrote, however, Im also thinking Ethan's suggestion in my midterm presentaion: tell the story from a more personal perspective. That could also be another way of my vocal in the story.

Anyway, I drew out the rough version of the new story pretty fast in order to get it out of my head and also to get some feedback from others. Thanks to Rabia, I already got some useful opinions and will put them into consideration for the next version storyboard.

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